Comments on: Saturday Writing Critique #6

By: Lisa

Lisa — Wed, 11 Jun 2008 14:06:34 +0000

Great rewrite. I’ve struggled with descriptions. I originally tried to make up a story or include lots of details, but now I’ve gotten shorter and blander. I’d be interested in you rewriting one, if you’d like.

By: Donna

Donna — Wed, 11 Jun 2008 04:19:40 +0000

Hi.. Very nice blog .. I sure can use a critique on my writing in my shop.I am pretty bad at it I think so any help you can give me would be greatly appreciated .

Thank you,

Donna Passarelli
Donnadidit.ety.com

By: Giftbird

Giftbird — Wed, 11 Jun 2008 04:11:21 +0000

I would really appreciate your help or any writing advice. Thanks so much for offering

By: Alison Kelley

Alison Kelley — Wed, 11 Jun 2008 03:25:16 +0000

I was just in the Etsy forum and saw your post. I would love it if you could check out my shop and he descriptions that I have. The listings on the front page and some of the second I have attempted to write better description on them, but I’m still not sure. By no means and I a writer, any help would very much be appreciated.

Thank you,
Alison

By: donna

donna — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 06:17:11 +0000

That was very informative. I have really been enjoying your blog.

By: Oh

Oh — Sun, 08 Jun 2008 13:36:30 +0000

I just took a piece at your work on Etsy and love it, the colors, the shapes AND the descriptions. Which is also why I stop by your blog – for the pure enjoyment of your design and the fun in helping others write their “ads.”

By: Terry Finley

Terry Finley — Sun, 08 Jun 2008 02:45:56 +0000

Always make an argument.
I think that’ll work.
thanks